Sunday, April 03, 2011

Creative Imaginations...


One of my favorite stories written by one of my students in our 'Story Structure' unit.  His spelling still needs some work, so there is a translation underneath if you can't figure out his own writing :

"Shrade"  (I'm not quite sure what the title means).



Wants apon atime there wus two ninjas.
1 ternd bad.
Varey bad.
They fitid.  The bad guy ascapt.
Good wan.
He was King aftr all.  He had the pawr to conchol the pawr fo litning.

TRANSLATION:
Once upon a time there was two ninjas.
One turned bad.
Very bad.
They fighted.  The bad guy escaped.
Good won.
He was king after all.  He had the power to conquer the power of lightning.

2 comments:

Keltie and Phil said...

Cute!

Jayme said...

i am ready for a new update...:P